七年级下册第一单元作文常考“我的一天”。很多同学会问:how to describe daily routines in english?答案:用一般现在时+频率副词+时间状语,按时间顺序写,注意动词第三人称单数。

一、时间轴:让作文像列车一样准时
先画一条“时间轴”,把起床、上学、午餐、放学、睡觉五个节点标出来。写的时候,从**morning**到**evening**依次推进,读者一眼就能跟上节奏。
- 6:30 a.m. I get up and brush my teeth.
- 7:00 a.m. I have breakfast with my parents.
- 7:30 a.m. I go to school by bike.
二、动词三单:为什么加s?
第三人称单数动词加s,是七年级最易丢分点。口诀:**“他她它,动词加尾巴”**。例如:
- She wakes up at six.
- My brother plays basketball after school.
自问:为什么不是wake?答:因为主语是she,第三人称单数。
三、频率副词:让句子更生动
把**always, usually, often, sometimes, never**放在动词前,立刻升级句子。
| 副词 | 频率 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| always | 100% | I always drink milk for breakfast. |
| never | 0% | He never eats junk food. |
四、连接词:让段落不脱节
常用连接词:**first, then, after that, finally**。示范段落:

First, I do my homework. Then, I watch TV for half an hour. After that, I take a shower. Finally, I go to bed at 9:30.
五、细节描写:用五官写感受
别只说“I eat breakfast”,可以写:
I eat **steaming hot noodles** that smell like garlic and sesame oil. The soup warms my hands on cold mornings.
六、范文示例:My Busy Tuesday
My Tuesday starts at 6:15. The alarm rings loudly, so I jump out of bed quickly. I usually make my bed and open the window to let fresh air in. At 6:30, I take a quick shower and put on my blue school uniform. My mom prepares **scrambled eggs and toast** for me. I always eat them with strawberry jam.
At 7:10, I ride my bike to school with my best friend Lily. We often talk about our favorite K-pop songs on the way. Classes begin at 7:40. We have four lessons in the morning. My favorite is English because our teacher tells funny stories.

At 12:00, I have lunch in the school canteen. I usually choose rice, chicken and broccoli. After lunch, I read in the library for twenty minutes. The afternoon classes finish at 4:30. Then I join the basketball club. I practice shooting and passing until 5:30.
After I get home, I help my dad cook dinner. We make tomato and egg noodles. They taste sour and sweet. I do my homework from 7:00 to 8:30. Then I watch a cartoon with my little sister. At 9:30, I brush my teeth and go to bed. I feel tired but happy because I had a full day.
七、常见错误清单
- 漏掉s:He go to school → He goes to school.
- 时间顺序乱:先写dinner再写lunch。
- 句子过长:一口气写30词,读者会喘不过气。
八、升级技巧:加入情感与对比
自问:如何让作文更感人?答:加入情感词和对比。
原句:I do homework at night.
升级:I do homework at night **while my little brother sleeps soundly**. The house is quiet except for the ticking clock.
九、练习任务:写你的周末
用今天学到的技巧,写一段80词的小短文,描述你的周末早晨。要求:
- 用三个频率副词。
- 用两个连接词。
- 加入一个感官细节。
掌握时间轴、动词三单、频率副词、连接词和细节描写,七年级下册第一单元作文就能稳拿高分。现在就动笔,写下你独一无二的“daily routine”吧!
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